Final Editing

After getting our feedback, we went back and tried to change some little things in our opening to make them that little bit better. The first problem was my voice in the dialogue, we cleverly thought chloes pitch in her voice would suit our genre much better, so straight away i got her to re-record over my speech. This worked very well. The next cristism we got was that some parts of our opening were 'over edited' we decided to tone tone the editing and make it look more natural, we then showed it to a few peers, and the response was much better. We connected all of our digetic and non-digetic sounds to our opening, and together it looks so effective, and very professional. We then worked on making the credits look more realistic in a film, and also evenly set them out, as two names came up quicker and more rapidly than the other two. But overall we are all very proud of our progress as a group, and have had a lot of fun filming an editing this opening.