Feedback from our audience

The final question on the feedback sheet, which would generally help us to improve our opening was;
Did you notice any serious issues such as continuity errors, strange edits - Did anything not make sense to you?
"Story line was a bit confusing but knew roughly what was going on, sharpen the shots so they are closer together"

• "Storyline was a quite confusing but i knew roughly what was going on. Maybe sharpen some of the shots a bit?."
• "Sound needs a bit of work."
• "Didn't get the bit with the train."
• "Some bits are too dark, can't see as well."
• "Camera shots are slightly jumpy."

With this helpful critisism, as a group we can now go away and thouroughly look over these points and tweek our opening sequence were we need to, this will make it that much more effective for the audience.